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Do you still think GalCiv 1 is fun even with GalCiv II out?
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#175  by Veteran Jedi_Master_Yoda - 2/4/2004 7:49:19 PM

No thats fine, its our most interesting recruitment banter written.

                    
#176  by Citizen Exar Kuun - 2/4/2004 7:52:17 PM

It is good

When can expect to read your ship's story? What do you think of the idea of a story for each ship?

                      
#177  by Veteran Jedi_Master_Yoda - 2/4/2004 7:57:48 PM

I think it'd be great for us to each have a narritive about our ships, my own won't be ready for a while, I lost the will to quill so I havn't started it yet. I'd expect a few days mabey shorter...

                    
#178  by Citizen Exar Kuun - 2/4/2004 8:00:56 PM

I'd expect a few days mabey shorter...


Can't wait to read it

Question for Kryo: how much space do we have on the website? Is there a limit?

                      
#179  by Citizen MBM0686 - 2/4/2004 8:38:10 PM


Ok here it is part 2, Enjoy everybody

The Story of Procyon I


Chapter 2: Debriefing

There it was Starbase 138 also known as ?Starcity? in all its glory. It consisted of a large pencil-like structure at the center. Attached by bars protruding from the central column was a giant ring. Sitting just atop of the ring was a giant dome that began at the central structure and ended just on top of the large ring. That was where the civilians who were stationed there lived and worked. The large ring on which it rested and the lower levels of the base were off limits to civilian personnel. They were under the control of the Procyon military.

?There it is Weaver, Starbase 138. The closest thing to civilization around.?

?Its nothing compared to Procyon though eh M.B.M??

?That it isn?t Weaver. That it isn?t.?

We circled the base three times before we would call in the request to dock to 138 Command. Then we were approached by a fighter from the base. It was identical to ours except that it was modified for base defense.

?This is officer Opuno. Please state your name and reason for being here? said a rough voice over the comm.

I hesitated for a moment. The harsh interrogating voice took me by surprise. Then there was blaster fire. It went right past the nose of my ship. It rocked my ship a bit but caused no damage.

?Please state your name and reason for being here, or I will be forced to shoot you down,? barked Opuno showing just a little fear now.

?This is M.B.M and my wingman here is Weaver. We were stationed on the SS Defender of the Procyon fleet we intend to dock at the base.?

?If you are stationed on the Defender why aren?t you there now?? he asked suspiciously.

?We were attacked. The ship was completely destroyed.?

?You two were the only survivors??

?Yes.?

?Wait here. I need to convey your story to my superiors.?
His ship remained in firing position. I decided not to make any sudden moves.
Opuno might just take them as a threat. Weaver followed suit.

?This is Opuno again. Apparently you two are in the military, but my superiors want to hear your story personally. Please follow me and do not deviate from my course or you will be shot down. We now have clearance to dock.?

The three of us flew into the docking bay with no problem. The docking bay was huge. At least the military part of it was. The civilian ports were smaller, but the area seemed quite empty.

?They have cleared the civilians out of the bay. The commander doesn?t want anybody knowing that you two are here. The commander seems to have taken an interest in you? Said Opuno.

We walked through the bay and proceeded to an elevator that would take us to the center of the station. That was where the commander would be. The journey was uneventful but something was bothering me. All this secrecy?. Something had to be up. I also hadn?t met someone who was so high up on the military chain before, and if the commander wants to speak to us personally something must really be up. After a few minutes we arrived. The door was a plain drab gray but the commander lay inside.

?M.B.M. the commander wants to see you alone,? said Opuno not restraining his jealously. ?I will escort Weaver to the civilian area. You can see him later,?

I walked into the room not knowing what to expect. Nobody was there so I took a seat in front of the desk which lies in the center of the room. It was furnished with a lamp but it was the only thing to give life to the room. Then an unseen door opened and in stepped the commander. I was surprised to see that it was a woman but I quickly threw it off.

?Okay,? she said calmly. ?Tell me everything that happened.?

I proceeded to explain how we were out on patrol and how we were attacked so suddenly. I explained how we tried to defend and that the Defender?s weapons were down so we were only little help. She listened intently. Never interrupting until I was done.

?This has been happening a lot lately with ships patrolling our borders. The Kraidens must be up to something.? She said coldly. ?I am going to put you in command of a cruiser with an important cargo bound for home planet. ?Its name is the SS ArcAngel. I?ve been reviewing you record for some time and I believe you are the only competent pilot on board.?

?Thank you,? I said astonished at the compliment. ?Maybe when I get back we can??

Then there were loud crashed in the distance.

?What was that??

The commander spoke almost silently into her desk comm.

?We are under attack,? She said solemnly. ?You need to launch as soon as possible. If that cargo doesn?t reach Procyon we will all be doomed.?

?What about Weaver. I can?t leave him here.?

?Don?t worry about him we will get him out safely.?

With that I proceeded out the door and headed directly to the docking bay.

[Message Edited]

                      
#180  by Citizen MBM0686 - 2/4/2004 8:44:05 PM

sorry about the question marks...
most of them should be Quatation marks.

                      
#181  by Citizen Exar Kuun - 2/4/2004 8:44:54 PM

Nice one MBM - keep it up Will post on the site tommorrow - need sleep now

                      
#182  by Citizen MBM0686 - 2/4/2004 8:45:58 PM

ok

                      
#183  by Veteran kryo - 2/4/2004 9:30:36 PM

Question for Kryo: how much space do we have on the website? Is there a limit?


The reactor will keep on going till alex starts quoting scotty, so by all means load 'er up

                        
#184  by Veteran Samurai Ben - 2/4/2004 11:55:37 PM

No thats fine, its our most interesting recruitment banter written.


(sniff)

And not a mention of the author, either...though you might want to ask Spellforce if he can edit the "Qui-Gon" and "Dooku" references to more active player names.

Speaking of which, anybody heard from Qui-Gon lately? The Jedi's first masochist...ah, those were heady days for the Republic...Kit training KEmperor in the dark arts...Yoda with platform shoes...the Great War with GROSS that lasted about 25 minutes...

                    
#185  by Veteran Jedi_Master_Yoda - 2/5/2004 12:26:11 AM

the Great War with GROSS that lasted about 25 minutes...


Maspher Yoda, perhaps someone deleted it from the archives files.

Wonderful is the mind of a child

                    
#186  by Citizen Exar Kuun - 2/5/2004 4:40:09 AM

And not a mention of the author


Apologies Ben, I did not know who the author was at the time

                      
#187  by Citizen Exar Kuun - 2/5/2004 5:02:48 AM

The Jedi's first masochist


Am trying to move up to maso now but I can't seem to make the jump from crippling, has anyone got any suggestions?

                      
#188  by Citizen damoose - 2/5/2004 7:30:26 AM

has anyone got any suggestions?


Lots of begging and grovelling.

                      
#189  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 3:36:34 PM

Well I'm at #80 now... time to get into the top 75.

                      
#190  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 3:37:37 PM

And my shield finally turned to Challenging!

                      
#191  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 5:49:13 PM

Quite in here today...

                      
#192  by Citizen Jaws the Wayfarer - 2/5/2004 5:51:34 PM

absolutely

                          
#193  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 5:54:04 PM

absolutely


hehehe... Gotcha

                      
#194  by Veteran kryo - 2/5/2004 6:26:58 PM

Well I'm at #80 now... time to get into the top 75


Hurry up and come keep me company in the top 25 before I get recalced down a few more spots again to page 2

                        
#195  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 6:32:29 PM

Hurry up and come keep me company in the top 25 before I get recalced down a few more spots again to page 2


I'll try... but I don't think I can do that.

                      
#196  by Veteran GASherbert - 2/5/2004 7:06:53 PM

Sorry about my absence. Midterms.

                      
#197  by Veteran Jedi_Master_Yoda - 2/5/2004 7:08:02 PM

Welcome back Sherbert!

                    
#198  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 7:11:30 PM

Welcome anyone and everyone!

                      
#199  by Citizen Arcilte - 2/5/2004 7:11:42 PM

Close...

                      
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